Green Monkey

Your story is good, but the beginning sound like something from "Rurouni Kenshin" to me. That was my original intent when I escaped the secret training ground. By all laws ...

Your piece shows skill and quality. "This is her story, though not much has happened you can say. There wasn't much of a difference from day to day. Pretty much ...

I really like your piece... Though I do seem to say that about everything, I only reply to ones that are good, therefor I say that a lot. "some time ...

[quote="Deloclya"] The Curse of Mortality Death doesn’t hurt the ones who die, It hurts the ones who must say goodbye. quote] That part is really cool! I really like your ...

very good sci-fi. I am currently working on my own piece. "Without warning, he saw the turret on the gunship turn toward him. At that second, he was looking down ...

While battle raged at local town squares, which had been commonplace for trade and event, women and children had been ushered into the stone manor of Lalthan." I really liked ...

Your piece is very..... different. is the "us" this poem keeps refering to a ton of blood thirsty cannibals or something, cause it sure seems that way... :( Anyway, this ...

Umm. I like your poem, but i wasn't able to get why it's under the lyric poetry forum. The beautiful thing about regular blood is that you can control the ...

all i manage to create is a bucketful of meaningless e-mails that infect your inbox and limit our decaying relationship to nothing more than a few lines on an instant ...

*sniff* *sniff* its so beautiful and good... *sniff* I really like it. :cry: I really never lost someone I knew close, but some of my distant realatives have died. I ...

Wow, its so pretty! [I probably shouldn't use that word....] Your writing is very meaningful. It shows power and addresses problems in the world (at least, how i see it). ...

Clever and witty and hilarious and super duper awesome and so funny! :lol: I dont 't think I've read a more rambling piece that was actually as good as this ...

Umm... A bit psychotic, don't you think. Look, Young writers society is for people who like to write, like me. The reason I'm your first reply is because your writing ...

Hmm... Sorry I would not know wether it is your best or not, but I do know its the best of yours I have read. Based on what I have ...

Umm... Your "poem" is good though its not the type of thing I'd show to people on YWS. But I guess its a good way to fell apoletic about what ...